There was a monter under my bed I was sraced. I ran to my mom and dad's room. They said I was ok . They saw under my bed.
jakiera3612
9/23/2013 01:39:20 am
onace upon the time there was a princes named stars and she had a lot of difrent dress that was a lot of difren't colors and she had a blue dress ,a green dress, a pink dress ,and a purple dress and they all did difrent things to her like the blue one made her happy the green one remind her of her mom the pink one was her faviorte color and the purple one was here dad fav color
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Arlyn:)
9/25/2013 01:06:24 am
I loved your story i loved the part where you said she had so many diffrent dresses!
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leslie 247
9/25/2013 03:42:37 am
I liked the part when you said star has a blue dress!
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araceli
9/24/2013 01:41:19 am
jakiera I loved your story it was amazing!!!
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leslie 247
9/25/2013 09:15:28 am
I love your story jakiera.
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ladyteri
9/24/2013 04:13:23 am
jakiera i love your story
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loveteri
9/25/2013 01:06:20 am
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tristan Xbox
9/25/2013 01:14:32 am
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king efren
9/25/2013 01:20:02 am
There was once a ant ho was all ways mad. That he said no!!!!!!! to the Quin. The Quin got mad she said "!!you are out of her!!!" the mad ant said "no".
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leslie 247
9/25/2013 09:28:28 am
Efren you alwas have to say everithing whit quin and king put the story is funny.
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leslie 247
10/14/2013 01:34:46 am
annie i don't understand your story can you put a little more details so you can make your story
Zayn and Annie
9/25/2013 03:41:37 am
once there were two best friend in the world Emanuel Brady there the best friend but then the had a cool best friend name Job they fight all they said that your your NOT my best friend but the next day they said sorry then they there friend the end
brady,
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leslie 247
9/25/2013 03:47:46 am
what?
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Zayn and Annie
9/25/2013 03:43:33 am
hi i like the part when you said her faces got mad
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jakiera3612
9/25/2013 03:43:57 am
once there was a girl that didn't like anybody not even her family so if she wanted something she'll have to kiss up to her parents because she was so mean then her mom finally got her what she wanted and when she got it she didn't like it so she torched it so from that day on she never got anything from her family.
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Zayn and Annie
9/25/2013 03:48:58 am
i love your story
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jakiera3612
9/25/2013 03:50:24 am
thanks
zayn and annie
9/25/2013 03:49:36 am
what up
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AMAZING EMANUEL
9/25/2013 03:52:56 am
One day a girl name Annie.She saw a lost germen spepert the name was Rocky.She took it home.She asked her dad if she can keep the dog.
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teri
10/2/2013 03:56:34 am
Emanuel i love the prat she saw a dog.
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nial 123 zackary
10/2/2013 03:49:59 am
one day this band named one direction. got a gig at a beach. they sang one thing and that what makes you beautiful and hairy one of the gang members threw up all over the place. then after hairy threw up then zayn threw up after that leam threw up then louis threw up but nial never threw up the audience thought that was weird but then hairy realized that nial was not the real nial it was actually someone in big time rush. then they found nial in the back of there moving van
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leslie 247
10/14/2013 01:40:04 am
Zacakary I loved all your story keep up the good work.It was so funny I love it.
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jakiera3612
10/14/2013 04:12:13 am
Once there was a little girl that had toy monsters and one night they came alive and the little girl was sleep so they ate her then they went for the mom and dad and they found them so they ate them and don't nobody know where they are.
One day there was 5 girls and they all had a dream to go to losvagueas.They all wanted to be something there,and there parents werefine with it.So the next 2 weeks they had ablast in losvaguase!
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araceli
10/23/2013 01:29:11 am
One Day there was 5 beutiful princesses,they loved to go to partys and balls .But one day one of the princesses became frozen...then 3 more prinsesses became frozen!! There was only 1 more prinsess left..........AND SHE WAS THE QUEEN OF FREEZING PEOPLE!!!
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food
3/19/2014 03:58:53 am
im gon eat you like a sandwichhhh efren
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